An extract from my poem called 'You Took My Breath Away'

An extract from my poem called 

'You Took My Breath Away' 

'You Took My Breath Away' is a poem I'm unsure about and so I've not yet got the courage to publish it online. 

I kind of would love critical feedback on it, but I just don't know who to ask?

By Toni Cairns

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